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Post by Ace Mon Mar 15, 2010 2:05 pm

Introduction: This FanFic was created by Ace, everything said in it is by Ace. Some of it may be facts or lies, please watch out for the following: Violence, Language, Romance, and the Death. This story takes place in the following: Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and Letope (Letope is my own region, Will upload a map possibly later). This was created only for your entertainment, if you are under the age of thirteen (Skorge...) You may not read this unless adult supervision.

Spoiler:

^Gym Leaders, The Elite 4, and Champion of Shaychu (Also of my Region)

Spoiler:
^Main Characters

Ace, Trainer who has some bad luck, likes Flying Types
Alex, Twin Sister of Kass, Type Prefered unknown.
Kass, Twin Sister of Alex, Type Prefered unknown
Mercury, British man who likes Bug Types
David, Son of Ash, Bad so far. Stole some pokemon, likes Fire Types.

Variant, Leader of Team Rocket, currently in Hoenn. Likes Dual Types.
Cirrus, Co-Leader of Team Rocket, currently in Hoenn. Likes
Abby, Likes Wearing Big Earrings.
Henry, Oldest member. Taking Control of Radio Tower in Johto.
Justin, Scientist/Inventor for Team Rocket, currently in Kanto.

Gold, Champion of Letope
Quan, Electric Gym Leader/ Undercover Agent

Characters Current Teams

(If you want certain pokemon tell me in PM)

(Changed Quan's pic to Watson, and added Some Vs. Hoenn Sprites I found)
(I might use the Hoenn sprites later)

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Post by Bibarel Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:23 pm

thanks for making me hot Wink xD

Shouldnt Dutybear be morty?Cuz Ice


Alex, Older Sister of Kass
Kass, Younger Sister of Alex

love those lawl
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Post by Ace Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:29 pm

(ok lol I just didn't think he would wanna be him, Of course He should be Morty. Lol They're both Canadian so I thought why shouldn't I make them related, and Your welcome)


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Post by Bibarel Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:10 pm

Another Sugestion
Since Jack is Water Can He Be Misty?Lawl


And Can I Has More Than Gym Leader Role Leik Can I Come In A Spazz Every once ina while xD

Suggestions You Dont Have To Do

But Jack=Misty Would Be Epic
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Post by South Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:34 pm

Of course I would be Brock.......
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Post by Ace Tue Mar 16, 2010 9:53 pm

(Yes Quan, you can come into the story at random times to bother the main characters, Maybe if Jack wants to be Misty, and Yeah South there is no Ground types except that old lady, also plz stop typing stuff, I haven't even written a single Chapter and I have Fans)

Chapter 1: Tycoon Tower's Victim, Part 1

"Sigh" I said to myself waiting for the Private Eye Youth graduation to be over. Yeah, teens being Private Investigators. This plan was created for youth spies to secretly do missions that some adults couldn't do for some reason. Only about one in a thousand kids were chosen based on Intelligence, Physical Shape, and Decisiveness. Yeah I was that one in a thousand, but the school, training, tests, and the mind boggling puzzles were a bit too much and got on my nerves. Today only about twenty teens graduated and were immediately put on Cases, Mysteries, or Crimes.

Yes once again I was in that number, but I had graduated with some friends. One guy from a Region Named Great Britain, and Two girls from a Region called Canada. They were sisters, the odds of getting your sibling in training with you was one in ten thousand. I was glad to get a mission and get far away from this place and never return. Our Boss was none other then the great Looker himself. "How much longer will this take?" Mercury said in his cool accent, "I know, maybe getting pokemon" Alex said. "Of course it would, it's so boring just doing nothing" Kass agreed.

"You know Private Investigators don't get pokemon, we just solve crimes, and cases, and go places, and help people, and arrest people, and stop bad guys, and retrieve what has been stolen, and..." I said before getting Double Slapped by Kass and Alex "Shut up Ace!" they both said at the same time "Yeah, sometimes you keep talking even though it's not nessecary" Mercury replied.

35 Minutes later

"Yeah, we are going to take down Team Rocket!" Alex said.
"They are not going to be easy to get rid of, they're in every region" Kass said.
"I've noticed that" Mercury said.
"Well our first case is to solve a murder, At the Tycoon Tower" I said with the Folder.
"Oh god, a dead body?" Kass said.
"Of Course, that's what a murder is" Alex said.
"Oh no, they'll fight again" Mercury said.
"Maybe they'll stop on the Helicopter to the Tower" I said.

5 Minutes later

"Stop fighting" the Pilot said "Or I'm gonna land in the Ocean!".
"You were wrong Ace, they kept fighting" Mercury said.
"I said Maybe, anyway we're almost there" I said looking out the window.
"Why is there Murkrow and Honchkrow following us?" Kass said.
We turned around and saw Multiple Dark/Flying types flying behind us.

In another helicopter an evil man from Team Rocket was Yelling at his Flying Followers, "Attack that Helicopter! Make sure they don't make it to Tycoon Tower!"
"Oh crap" I said running to the Pilot "Help?".
"Hold on" he said taking off his hat revealing blond spiky hair.
"Who are you?" I asked.
"I'm the Electric Gym Leader, Quan!" He said grabbing a pokeball and pressing Auto-Pilot, "Go Electivire! Use Thunderwave!" he said.
Almost instantly the Electivire sent a shockwave paralyzing all those flying pokemon.
"Grr, Go ShedNinja!" He said while still standing in the Helicopter.

The GPS system said "Arriving at Battle Frontier in, 2 Minutes".
"Electivire, Use Flamethrower!" He said than jumped back to the Pilot seat while Electivire attacked from inside the helicopter.
"Here kids take a Pokeball from the bag, when we land run towards the tower while I distract them, understand?" Quan asked
"Yes Sir" we all said grabbing a pokeball from his bag.

As soon as the Helicopter landed we jumped out while the Team Rocket guy battled Quan.
"Send out your Pokemon, they might come after us!" I said.
"Go!" We all said.

Kass got a Shinx
Mercury got a Magnemite
Alex got a Pichu
Ace got a Mareep

(Part 2 to come laterz, We all got Electric Types because Quan is an Electric Type Gym Leader)


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Post by indidoge Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:32 pm

good! i guess. xD jks. Why could not have me and Kass been twins or something? (diff looking twins). we're the same age @.@ (actually, same age but shes a year ahead of me.. =3) + dawn is the weirdest character EVA but w/e... [why must i always complain?... *must work on own fan-fic >>*]
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Post by 7 Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:53 pm

I'd like to be an enemy, if that's alright. Also gender doesn't matter this time, choose whatever one you want.
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Post by Bibarel Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:35 am

You mean i gave away some pokemon? D= xD
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Post by Ace Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:10 pm

(Kass and Alex are now twins, Kass is now Whitney
Quan gave us our first Pokemon, Don't worry quan you have more anyway, and you are so BA you stop Cirrus while we escape from him,
7 is now the Leader of Team Rocket)
(I prefer calling it Tycoon Tower, but it's actually called Battle Tower)

Chapter 1: Tycoon Tower's Victim, Part 2

Case File: Man fell out of the 39th floor of the Tycoon Tower window that was bullet proof.
Name: Joseph
Background: A man who enjoyed battles, was about to challenge Palmer. Twenty Minutes before that Ash the Diversity Gym leader, Challenged Tower Tycoon Palmer and won. The body was discovered by Interviewers wanting to speak with Ash on his Battle Frontier Victory but discovered the bloody sidewalk that flowed down some stairs. With the The Victim is lying next to an window that is unbroken, the victim is also missing his Pokemon.

"Get the camera Kass, and take plenty of pictures" I said still holding the file.
"Ace, look for evidence on the 39th with Merc" Alex said back.
"Right" I said still holding on to the file while our pokemon were wondering around.
"Come on Magnemite" Merc said gesturing his hand toward the building while Mareep and Magnemite followed us.

While in the Elevator

"If it was bullet proof, why wasn't it man proof?" Merc asked.
"That's what we have to find out, You ask Witnesses and write down valuable information while I go looking for clues" I said rereading the file again.

Meanwhile back at the Crime Scene outside the Tower

"There is nail polish on this man's shirt" Alex Said
"There is also some lipstick on his face" Kass replied
"So maybe he had a female friend with him?"
"The only Females are the Elevator Operators"
"Let's go investigate this matter"

Mercury's Interviews

Thorton: Ash defeated me, he has talent. He than challenged the Battle Palace?
Darach: He had great power, correct? He went to the Battle Tower Right After.
Battle Tower's Attendant: Ash? Omg he's Hot? Yeah he came by here, he left to the Battle Hall!

Mercury walked in and saw Ash's 4th battle taking place

"Pikachu, Finish with Thunderbolt!" Ash shouted when he turned with Mercury staring him in the Eyes. "We need to speak" Mercury said.

(More to come later on)
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Post by Ace Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:30 am

(Our pokemon are Level 12, because I said so)

Chapter 1: Tycoon Tower's Victim, Part 3

Kass went to interview the Elevator Operators and checked their lipstick and Nail polish.

"Hey Alex, I found a screwdriver!" I said
"So what Ace?" she said back
"Look closely at the wall, the window was bolted down"
"So somebody unbolted it? But for what reason?"
"We'll have to find out"

Mercury and Ash's Meeting

"Did you kill a guy named Joseph?"
"No, I was busy being the best trainer eva"
"So you left the building before Joseph got there?"
"I'm pretty sure, after defeating Palmer I got onto the elevator to the first floor"
"Did you happen to see those interviewers that wanted to speak with you?"
"No, I just went to the other Battle Facilities"
"I guess that's all to ask"

Kass gets Kure in for questioning.
Ace took the Screwdriver to find prints
Mercury concluded his interviews and knows some possible suspects
Alex took the pictures and is inspecting them once more

Kass and Kure's Meeting on the 39th floor

"What were you doing on the about an hour ago?" Kass asked
"Using the Elevators to transport people to different floors"
"Was Joseph on of these people?"
"I don't know, what'd he look like?"

Kass hands Kure a picture and sees the reaction she's looking for

"Busted!" Kass shouted "You tried seducing Joseph for Hawt Secks and you stole his pokemon so he would sleep with you, but you pushed him out the window!"
"I knew the Window was unbolted! As for the pokemon... they belong to me now!" Kure shouted and took off running.

Ace, Alex and Mercury were going up the same elevator with their pokemon outside of their pokeballs.

Ace: The Fingerprints on the Screwdriver belongs to Cirrus, not Kure.
Merc: Cirrus was the one trying to stop us right?
Alex: Yes, he's part of Team Rocket. We are supposed to stop them all though.
Ace: Well we have Quan helping us but we need more people to help us.
Mercury: We're finally on the 39th floor

Kure pushes the Elevator door and is surprised to see us standing there.

"Don't let her escape!" Kass yelled while Pichu followed
"Magnemite, uh... use Super Sonic" Merc said trying to remember what Magnemite learn.

Magnemite used Super Sonic, Kure is wobbling around dizzily

"Salamence! Go" She said throwing a pokeball. "Roar!" Salamence yelled while flying outside the window that wasn't there.
"Mangemite, Use Metal Sound!" Mercury said.
"Mareep, Let's Use Tackle" I said

While Kure was trying to jump on Salamence's back to escape she stood still while Ace and Mareep Double Tackled her. The force sent the three out the window and onto Salamence's back. Salamence went flying away around Sinnoh's Battle Frontier.


Meanwhile at the Radio Tower in Goldenrod City

"Excellent, We have successfully taken control of this Radio Tower!" Variant said
"Sir, Cirrus is returning. He didn't stop the children" Henry said
"What!? He should of stopped them from solving that 'Accident'. Grr" Variant
"At least we have Lugia Captured" Abby said
"Really!? At last, one of the Flying Pokemon of Johto is Mine!" Variant Exclaimed
"It was because Justin's Invention worked successfully" Abby replied
"Give that man a raise!" Variant shouted
"As you wish Sir" Abby said walking out the room
"Henry, take over Tin Tower. We must have Ho-Oh as well, and don't fail me!" Variant said
"Yes sir, I won't fail you" Henry said walking outside
"Don't worry Private Investigators, your death will be quick and Painless!" Variant shouted.


Will Ace plummet to his death?
Will Kure be stopped?
Can the Private Eye Trainers arrest Kure?
Will Variant's plan to take Ho-Oh Succeed?

(Find out later on Private Eye Trainers)
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Post by indidoge Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:50 pm

heyo.. im officially the most confuzzled person on the planet. *briefly makes confuzzled a word on firefox..*

So. Who is what character and what pokemon do we have? xD

other than that confusion.. good fan-fic 👍
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Post by Ace Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:59 pm

Ace wrote:Kass got a Shinx
Mercury got a Magnemite
Alex got a Pichu
Ace got a Mareep

(Part 2 to come laterz, We all got Electric Types because Quan is an Electric Type Gym Leader)

^ what pokemon we get

Joseph died because Cirrus unscrewed the window for the plan to take action. Kure took Joseph's Pokemon so he would have secks with her. Little did he know he was about to die. She was making out with him than quickly pushed him through the unbolted window.

Hence Lipstick on Victim's Face, and Nail polish on his shirt.

Currently I tackled Kure with Mareep through the Window since she was confused/ annoyed by Metal Sound.
Kure, Me and Mareep fell onto Salamence's back while Salamence is flying around the Battle Frontier trying to shake me off so I can't take back the victim's poke and rightfully arrest Kure.

Understand? Anymore questions will be clarified as soon as I can answer them

Meanwhile this was taking place Variant Gained control of the Radio Tower, and capture Lugia with Justin's Invention, Justin got a big fat Paycheck and is now on vacation at the Sevii Islands.
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Post by 7 Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:31 pm

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
I WILL PROCEED TO MAKE EVERYBODY LISTEN TO THE GLORY THAT IS
ALTERNATIVE HEAVY METAL PUNK ROCK RAP POP HIP-HOP REGGAE CLASSICAL FOLK OPERA RAGTIME BLUES
Doesn't exist yet, but it should.

I lead Team Rocket. All will respect me or die rebelling.
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Post by Ace Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:27 pm

Chapter 1: Tycoon Tower's Victim, Part 4

Meanwhile at the Radio Tower in Johto

"Hello and thanks for listening to Rocket Radio, I'm Variant with our guest Naruto"
"Glad to be here Variant" Naruto said while still being Broadcasted
"So how's being champion of Letope?"
"Good... except no challengers lately"
"Hey, what about joining Team Rocket. You'll get lots of battles"
"I don't know... I heard some stuff"
"Come on join"
"I don't know"
"I'm telling you to join!"
"I don't think I want to join now" Naruto said getting out of his seat but getting lock into his chair by some Rocket Grunts
"Let go of me! Help! Somebody help me!" Naruto yelled as his mouth got Duct Tape"
"I asked you nicely, but now we'll have to cut short to a commercial"
"Hmph, argh!"
"I agree Naruto, Team Rocket is the Best!" Variant said finishing up his Broadcast.

Meanwhile on Kure's Salemence's back

"Get off here kid!" Kure said
"Not until you give me those Pokemon, they don't belong to you"
"It's not like Joseph will need them"
"But they aren't yours to keep"
"I've heard enough of this, Salamence Fly higher!"
"ARGH!!!" I said as I was falling down towards the ground, "RETURN MAREEP!!!!!" I said while still managing to fall in style.

"Kyoaah"
"WHAT!?" I managed to say before landing on something "Whoah, Arcticuno in Sinnoh?!" I said while Arcticuno flew me back to the ground.

Shortly after getting off of Arcticuno's back

"See ya later Arcticuno!" I said while Arcticuno flew away towards Mt. Coronet
"Ace, why were you trying to be a hero?" Alex said before slapping me.
"Seriously Ace, you could've died" Kass said before slapping me.
"What were you thinking!" Mercury said while drinking some Tea.
"Ok... I wanted to arrest Kure, I knew I might've died, and I don't want to see another dead body out there because of Kure!" I said while still staring at Arcticuno.

"Uh... those are good answers" Mercury said while pondering my answers
"But the weird thing is, Why is Arcticuno in Sinnoh?" I said
"What do you mean?" Kass said
"Aren't Arcticuno's near Kanto? Why is one here in the Sinnoh Region?" I asked
"Well, maybe Arcticuno has some business here?" Alex said
"Alex, I don't think Legedary Pokemon such as Arcticuno have any business except..." I said stopping myself from thinking what I was currently thinking but shouldn't of been thinking.

"Ace, what in the Queen's name are you thinking?" Mercury said sternly
I than said "Have any business except getting Captured"
Mercury, Alex and Kass stared at one another than at me.

(Chapter 2: The Mystery of Naruto's Disappearance)
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Post by Cirrus Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:23 pm

Ace wrote:"Grr, Go ShedNinja!" He said while still standing in the Helicopter.

*Shedinja. Although my Shedinja's nickname is "SHEDDY". Interesting story so far. afro
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Post by Ace Tue Mar 23, 2010 4:40 pm

(Lol I meant to minus the N but I had to emphasize the Ninja Part)
(This part is for randomness)

Meanwhile Justin is Vacationing at the Sevii Islands

"Nice and relaxing weather here" Justin said putting Sun Lotion on his body "And I can work on my tan while vacationing here away from Team Rocket"
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Post by HanoHano Tue Mar 23, 2010 4:42 pm

Hellz yea.

Ace, did I make the Snag Machine by any chance? Or is it a new machine not related to the current pokemon games at all.

Anyway, I enjoy all teh senoritas bringing me lemonade on teh beach. X]
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Post by 7 Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:02 pm

Soccer, I am one of the senoritas.
Moment ruined. Get back to work.


lol jk, enjoy your vacation.
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Post by Chrono Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:12 pm

omg this story to good TOOOOO good. hope you can keep the momentum going Ace!!!!!
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Post by Zak Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:22 pm

Dnt make me a crappy trainer xD

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Post by Bibarel Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:33 pm

Zak wrote:Dnt make me a crappy trainer xD
Make Him A Crappy Trainer
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Post by Ace Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:07 pm

(Couldn't get online that much)
(Like i said, PG13 this scene involves Alcohol) (Please remove this story admins if you wish)

At the Sevii Islands

"Bring me my Margarita Babe" Justin said while getting his tan. "Here you go" Some lady we do not know yet said. "Justin, come back to the hotel with me" she said.
Justin thought of this. Should he get his tan? Or get Laid?
"As soon as I'm finished with my tanning, ok?" Justin said to her. Disappointed but agreeing she walks along the shore back to the Hotel. "Now then, time to get my tan evened out" Justin said to himself sipping his Margarita.

5 minutes later

"Babe, I said wait at the Hotel for me....." Justin said opening his eyes but instead seeing a bright red figure flying above over him blocking his sun. "Moltres!?" Justin said adjusting his eyes to the blinding sun. While staring at Moltres fly towards Mt. Ember, Justin got up and said to himself "Time to get my Early Retirement!".

Chapter 2: The Mystery of Naruto's Disappearance

"Our next case involves the missing champion from Letope" I said holding the next file.
"Letope? You mean that region that has a Battle Frontier as well?" Merc asked.
"And has those multiple Islands?" Alex asked.
"And the big Mountain on one of those islands?" Kass asked.
"Yeah, As well as that City where Naruto was last seen before going to Johto for that Radio Show" I said opening the profile.

Case File: Missing: Naruto, Champion of Letope
Possibly held for hostage, last seen Radio Tower, Goldenrod City, Johto Region. Heard Naruto ask for help on the radio after arguing with Variant. Find and bring Naruto back to the Letope Region safely.

"Let's go right now...." I said but thought of something.
"What's up Ace?" Alex asked.
"Quan was fighting Cirrus, could he be gone?" I said knowing our ride was probably gone. "Let's go see" Kass said running ahead of us.

Meanwhile at the Radio Tower in Goldenrod City

"Those kids are after me!" Variant said packing up his suitcase.
"Boss, why are you running. They're only kids." Henry said
"Just kids!? They almost caught Kure! She barely escaped that Ace kid!" Variant said.
"Then I'll just take him out first, those other kids will be next after" Henry said.
"Fine, you'll take control of the Radio Tower with Abby. While me and Cirrus take over the Mossdeep City Space Center, Team Rocket needs a rocket after all" Variant said.
"I won't fail you boss" Henry said standing near Naruto all tied up.
"I'll let Ashley watch over you" Henry said as a girl named Ashley walked in the room.
"You've been a bad boy Naruto, you'll need a spanking" She said getting a whip.
"HMPH!!!!" Naruto screamed through the duct tape.

Translation: NO!!!!!!!

Back at the Helicopter where Quan and Cirrus battle for 4 1/2 hours straight without getting tired

"Another Tie!?" Cirrus yelled frustrated.
"Let's just heal our Pokemon for the.. uh. I lost count" Quan said.
"Me too..." Cirrus said.
"Uh.. Quan?" Mercury said.
"Not right now kid, we're still fighting" Cirrus said.
"But we need to go to Johto..." Kass said.
"Find another way" Quan said still fighting with Cirrus.
"Fine..." I said walking away looking around the Battle Frontier.
"Ace? What are you doing?" Alex asked.
"You'll see" I said grinning.

To be continued

(Ha you'll have to read on to see what my plan is)


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Post by Bibarel Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:12 pm

In the end my crobat beats his drapion after he predicted a roost and used earthquake and i brave birded him for the win

bringing back memories cirrus?
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Post by Ace Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:21 pm

(lol I didn't know who would win in the fight so i said you guys had a tie for 4 1/2 hours)
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