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Post by 7 Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:23 pm

Spoiler:
I'll finish it later. I'm putting it on here so I can quick-edit it directly from the website.
No idea what it's about. I'm basically sputtering out nonsense from my brain and putting it on a metaphorical sort of paper.
At any rate, I suck at these things so if you will please give constructive criticism.
(This is actually the script for a visual novel. If you don't know what that is, I suggest you go play Phoenix Wright.)


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Post by Dragonartist713 Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:37 pm

its a good start to whatever kind of story it turns out to be ^^ sometimes the 'stream of conscienceness' is the best way to write a story, kept in its most raw and natural state. keep up with it ^^
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