Pokemon Armageddon: Chapter Eight: The Home
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Pokemon Armageddon: Chapter Eight: The Home
by Ash Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:15 pm
"Ugh..." as i moaned, "where am i?"
"You are in Your living room," Jenelle said as she pointed out the obvious.
"How long was i out?" i asked blantly.
"Um... 8 hours." Sora said with little information.
"Where's your refrigarator?" Jenelle said as she wanted to feed her Magnificent Togekiss.
"Um... turn left, then Right, And You'll Hit the Kitchen." I said.
"Hi Ashyboy!" Said this Matured Version of Jenelle.
"Mom?" I said.
"Yes Baby, is everything alright?" Delilah Said.
"im glad that the house is alright mom." i sail calmly.
"i know darling." Mom Said, "i made your favorite! Fried eggs and Peach-Mango Pie."
"no thanks mom" i said.
"Oh...okay, by the way Professor Oak Called, he needs to see you right away." She said with an utter sense of doubt.
"Okay Guys, go." i commanded
"You are in Your living room," Jenelle said as she pointed out the obvious.
"How long was i out?" i asked blantly.
"Um... 8 hours." Sora said with little information.
"Where's your refrigarator?" Jenelle said as she wanted to feed her Magnificent Togekiss.
"Um... turn left, then Right, And You'll Hit the Kitchen." I said.
"Hi Ashyboy!" Said this Matured Version of Jenelle.
"Mom?" I said.
"Yes Baby, is everything alright?" Delilah Said.
"im glad that the house is alright mom." i sail calmly.
"i know darling." Mom Said, "i made your favorite! Fried eggs and Peach-Mango Pie."
"no thanks mom" i said.
"Oh...okay, by the way Professor Oak Called, he needs to see you right away." She said with an utter sense of doubt.
"Okay Guys, go." i commanded
Last edited by Ash on Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:54 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Pokemon Armageddon: Chapter Eight: The Home
by Mercury Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:19 am
The Groudon at the end made no sense at all. And the capitals in the middle of sentences are getting annoying.
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Re: Pokemon Armageddon: Chapter Eight: The Home
by Ralts Tue Mar 03, 2009 8:09 pm
Mercury wrote:The Groudon at the end made no sense at all. And the capitals in the middle of sentences are getting annoying.
told you kuya. STOP CAPITALLIZING!!!!!!! :HyPeR!: :boom!:
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Re: Pokemon Armageddon: Chapter Eight: The Home
by NarutoHeartGold Tue Mar 03, 2009 8:46 pm
that is not bad either
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