Uhcyahs Village (Shaychu's Fictional Drama!)

Credit for the idea of this story goes to CHRONO! This is a DRAMA. Dramatic things will happen

Season 1 - Episode 1: "Pilot"

In Uhcyhas Village, there were 4 Sibilings--Nicole, Ash, Jack, and Cirrus. None of the sibilings have been married, they all however have kids.

First, there's Nicole.

Nicole is a Single mom who has Two Kids--David and Quan.
David is a 12 year old kid, who looks up to his older brother Quan, who dropped out of high school after getting his Girlfriend Abby pregnant.
Quan is Nicole's 17 year old Son, who dropped out of high school, after getting Abby pregnant. They plan to get married soon.
Abby is a 16 year old who is still in school, pregnant by Quan, and has been kicked out of her house by her parents after learning she was pregnant. She is living with the Lynns.

Then, there is Nicole's brother, Ash.

Ash is an Actor. He is 27 and adopted his child, Kassandra, when she was 13.
Kassandra is now a 20 year old who is married to Spencer. She owns her own Day-Care.
Spencer is Kassandra's 23 year old Husband. He has a mysterious scar running down from the bottom of his eye, down to the bottom of his neck. Not even Kassandra knows how he got it.

Then there's Jack.

Jack is a Alcohol addict. He has smex with women from bars, then somehow, gets stuck with the kids. He has 4 kids, no girlfriend, all by different women.
Collin is Jack's Youngest son. He tends to throw tantrums when he doesn't get his way.
Justin and Zayc are Jack's twins. They tend to follow each other everywhere.
South is the Oldest. He tends to annoy Collin, but stays away from Justin and Zayc.

And finally, Cirrus.

Cirrus has a Fiancee (SP). He met her in college, while getting his degree in Video Game Graphic Designing. He has 3 Boys, and 1 Daughter-In-Law.
Blitzer is Cirrus's sanest child. He is calm, and high intelectual. He is married to Espeon.
Espeon is married to Blitzer. The two are trying to have a child together.
Zappy is Cirrus's Oldest son. He is 27, and still living at home. His family thinks he is addicted to illegal drugs.
Naruto is another calm child of Cirrus. He was born mute (Unable to speak). He is a highly skilled artist.

--Nicole's House--
Nicole: David, Dinner!
David: Mommy, where is Quan..
Nicole: Quan is out with Abby.
David: Why is Abby getting fat..
Nicole: Err... Because... Abby is going through depresion which makes her eat more.
David: Why is she depressed
Nicole: Because.. Why don't you go wash up before dinner.
David: Why?
Nicole: Because I said so! Now Go!

--Kass's Day-Care--
Kass: Business is booming!
Spencer: Yea.. Because of Baby Boomers...
*Kass Laughs*

--Jack's House--
Collin: Where's Daddy?
South: Finding someone to take you away. He doesn't want you anymore
*Zayc hits South*
Zayc: SHUT UP DUMB@$$!
South: Well it's only true!
*South looks at Collin*
South: You're unwanted..
*Collin Cries*

--Cirrus's House--
Espeon: What about now..
Blitzer: Lock the door!
*Espeon takes off her clothes*
*Blitzer takes off his clothes*
Blitzer: Are you sure you are now?
Espeon: Yea! I know when I am!
Blitzer: Just checking..
*Moans from the Bedroom*
--Downstairs--
*Naruto begins shaking wildy on the couch, with no reason why.*
*Cirrus comes downstairs*
Cirrus: Oh my god!!

*Sirens Blare*

tl;dr
SparkNotes, anyone?

why am i so annoying in this story

im 12 not 7

Houndoom wrote:why am i so annoying in this story

im 12 not 7

It's a fan FICT. Fict=FICTION! IT'S NOT REAL! -.-

yeah but im just wondering...

WHY AM I NOT IN THIS?

cuz........ well...... ders alot of reasons!

again David's charecter should be a few years younger, or act more mature
who is the father of Nicole's kids? what happened to him?
who is Cirrus's girl? and who has 3 kids before they get married, usually after 1-2 with a special someone you'd get married
how did all of Jack's kids have different parents if he had twins?
how much older is Cirrus than Ash if Cirrus's kid is Ash's age?
good but a few questions left(a few other key things left unsaid, but that's all i care to mention)

Monkey

its a fan faction -_- calm down squirtle, hes not trying to make like a friggen perfect story xD

squirtle has a point atleast make the story make sence

id like to see the next part actually ^^; it sounds like it could be an interesting story

Episode 2: Double Mishap

--Cirrus's House--
*Flashback:
Cirrus: OMG!*

Operator: 911, what is your emergency?
Cirrus: Yes, I think my son is having a seizure
Operator: Is he making any noises
Cirrus: He's mute.
Operator: We're sending someout out now.
Cirrus: Why...
*Cirrus runs upstairs*
Cirrus: BLITZ! ESPEON! YOU'RE BROTHERS HAVING A SEIZURE, GET DOWN HERE NOW!
*Espeon looks blankly at Blitz*
*Espeon and Blitz put their clothes back on*
*Espeon and Blitz come back downstairs*
Cirrus: Thank God. Espeon.. what the heck is that on your lip..
*Espeon stares blankly at Cirrus and wipes it off*
*Cirrus realizes what was happening and turns away, looking at Naruto*
Cirrus: Where is Zappy? It's 3 AM in the morning.
Espeon: He always leaves after you go to sleep.
Blitz: He gets in this black car, and they drive off really fast, every night.
Cirrus: I'll check him out later, right now, we've got to wait for the ambulance to come. I need to call Melody.
*Cirrus calls his fiancee*
*Cirrus closes his phone*
Cirrus: No answer..
Blitz: Well it is 3 AM.. reckon' she's alseep?
Cirrus: Maybe.. I'll tell her tomorrow.
Blitz: You mean today..
Cirrus: Now isn't the time to be a smart@$$ Blitz
*Espeon chuckles*
*Blitz glares at Espeon*
*Espeon looks innocent*
*Ambulance arrives*
*Ambulance takes Naruto on a stretcher and Cirrus gets in the back*
Cirrus: Meet me at the hospital.
*Ambulance drives away*

--Behind A Car--
Mysterious Voice: You got it?
Another Voice: Yea I got it.
Mysterious Voice: You're the best person to buy from Zappy
Zappy: Shut up and give me my money
Mysterious Voice: Give me my w.eed
Zappy: Give me my f*cking money!
*Hands over a wad of Cash*
Zappy: Thank you..
*Hands over weed*
*Mystery Man Drives Away*
*Sirens Blare*
*Zappy gets nervous and hides behind the opposite side of the car*
*An ambulance passes*
*Zappy gets in the car and goes home*

--Kass's Daycare--
Kass: Spencer.. How did you get that scar...
Spencer: You really wanna know...
Kass: Yes! I do!
Spencer: I'll show you..
Kass: Wha.. What are you doing..
Spencer: Showing you how I got my scar..
*Spencer Rapes Kass*
*Kass pushes him off after 3 minutes and stabs him*
Spencer: The last person who gave me a scar.. Didn't get away.. Alive...
*Spencer grabs a lamp and bashes Kass in the head*
*Kass runs upstairs, bleeding, locks the door, and grabs a phone*
Operator: 911, What is your emergency?
Kass: My Husband is raping me!!
Operator: If you're married it's not considered wow..
Kass: He's trying to kill me..
Operator: We're sending help now!
*Spencer breaks down the door*

--End--

Why is he trying to wow her? I mean they are husband and wife, Trying to kill her makes more sense but raping her? Also when naruto is having a seizure why are they just standing around why dont you make it into a bit more action like hes holding his hand and hugging him ect....

justin is cirruc fiancé named melody suppose to mean something
???

xD

i thought it was cute ^^

Justin wrote:Cirrus: No answer..
Blitz: Well it is 3 AM.. reckon' she's alseep?
Cirrus: Maybe.. I'll tell her tomorrow.
Blitz: You mean today..
Cirrus: Now isn't the time to be a smart@$$ Blitz
*Espeon chuckles*
*Blitz glares at Espeon*
*Espeon looks innocent*

lol XD

Confuzzling Spinda wrote:justin is cirruc fiancé named melody suppose to mean something
???

xD

No... DX

Kass wrote:1. IT'S NOT CONSIDERED wow, THE LADY WAS RIGHT, AND I WOULDN'T RUN AWAY!!!
2. I WOULDN'T STAB HIM!
3. HE WOULDN'T TRY TO KILL ME!


Boo! I hate your story. =P

Kass

Like I said earlier it's a fan fict. which means FICTION o.o. IT'S NOT EFFIN REAL O_O O.O O_O

Kass wrote:1. IT'S NOT CONSIDERED wow, THE LADY WAS RIGHT, AND I WOULDN'T RUN AWAY!!!
2. I WOULDN'T STAB HIM!
3. HE WOULDN'T TRY TO KILL ME!


Boo! I hate your story. =P

Kass

Lol, pwned.