The History of Shaychu

New member: Wow nice space of land!!!!
Old Member: Thanks i help make it =3
N.M: Really wow you must be really good.
O.M: Thanks =p
N.M: So has anything exsiting ever happend on this land?
O.M: Welll.....

Long ago, the land of Shaychu wasn't here, it was filled with massive empires and they all hated each other, they fought each other untill they destroyed the other and took them as slaves and there land. There were 3 main empires that controlled most of the land, Serebii, Smogon, and Marriland. But there were little towns and villages all around.

And one day when Serebii was searching for new land they stumbled onto a peaceful village, they didn't know life outside there area, and serebii attack and enslaved them. The village tried to fight back but it was no use, most of the men were killed some women were abused and even some of the male children depending on what they looked like.

The slaves were transfered back to the capital of Serebii, Pooka, a great city its walls as tall as mountains, it was the strongest and safest place on the planet, The slaves were put into different rooms Women, Men, Boys, and Girls and people would come in and check the slave and if they liked they buy.

Our story follows in the room labeled Boys. There was a boy from the village named Ty, he was brave and his heart never skipped a beat.

???: Oh hi, you look lost, do you need help/
Ty: Yea? where am I?
???: Your in Pooka, in the empire of Serebii. Iam Ash by the way.
Ty: Iam Tyranitar but everyone calls me Ty.
Ash: Well Ty welcome to Slave waiting room.
Ty; Slave waiting room?
Ash: yea this is where the boys wait, if someone walks in try and hid you dont want to get picked, or else you doomed.

N.M: wow so who is Ty?
O.M: Ty is our hero, you will discover hid deads of bravery with his friends ash later,and how the handsom and very popular chrono saved there life a few times =p
N.M: is there any love?
O.M: Oh yea everyone wanted a piece of the chrono, and i think some others got a few action aswell.
N.M: Wow i cant wait for what heppens next.
O.M: Theres alot to be told, well i got to go my dog needs walking.
N.M: Bye
O.M: BI bI

more plz xD i cant wait for you to introduce me and if you dont MWUAHAHAHAHAHA

One rule tho i dont post anything without people posting >.> thats my only rule i will post and this tale will get complicated but witout posts i think people loosing interest.

One rule tho i dont post anything without people posting >.> thats my only rule i will post and this tale will get complicated but witout posts i think people loosing interest.

O.M: Hiya!!!
N.M: Oh hi! can you tell me some more, like what does Ty do now hes a slave?
O.M: All will be reveiled...


Soldier: Up and at em, its time to work you magots,

Ty: ehhh, is it morning already, we went to bed at 8 pm.
Ash: Its 12 Am, rise and shine.
Ty: No kidding
Solider: NO, TALKING OR I SWEAR I WILL SHOW YOU WHAT I DO TO LITTLE BOYS WHO DISSABEY ME! Ok fall in!

Ty: who is that.
ssh: That is none other than Lieutenant Rok leader of the Heated force and encharge of Boys slaves.
Ty: Ahh ok, by the way has anyone ever tried to escape?
Ash: Oh yea many of times, some succeed some fail and die, or captured and thrown into the pit of death, no one knows whats down there.

Ty and Ash followed the group of boys to a stand where they were lined up and stripped down to nothing but there cloth that covered there.....ARUGA

Ty: this is humiliating, that was some very good Ursarang fir that they just tore up.
Ash: Calm down thats not the worst of it, were getting actioned.
Ty: Auctioned?
Ash: Looks like Rok needs money.
Ty: He sells us?
Ash: He owns us.
Ty: Are they all like this these places?
Ash:I heard mix stories people from marriland say how they used to run on the mountain of Sky Point all day, and people who got captured say "they brutaly beat me, here count your blessings" like you should you dont have to work your getting sold easily.
Ty: Is work hard?
Ash: Is work hard? Is work hard? Boy what kind of messed up village did you come from?
Ty: In my village a boy will only become a man and fit to work once he has defeated rock bird and takes his head for sacrifece to the great shamin.
Ash:Boy thats messed up, and dont you mean an Arodactyl. see you gotta learn you animals.

Rok: NOW BOYS once all the nice little gentalman and ladies come here to buy you, look your best you could find your future home here, if not you with me FOREVER ahahaha.

Ash: Some people buy slaves and freee them after buying and hire them as maids. they usually take it.

A few hours past and Tys feet grew weiry untill people began to show up, then he saw one buy one boys going up being sold and money exchanged.

Rok: HERE WE GOT A FINE STRONGE LAD, WITH GOOD MUSSLES A FEW WORK OUTS AND WOULD BE GOOD TO WORK, HE IS HEALTHY AND WOWZA HE WILL GIVE YOUR SLAVES GOOD LOOKING CHILDREN.

crowd: 60 SEREBIANS
Crowd; 100 SEREBINS.

Rok: sold!

Soon it was Ty's turn and he was nervous, he wished this never happend and his life would go back to the way it was.

Rok; Next we have hmmm looks weak but is quiet strong, adverage looking, and quiet healthy.

Ty was very embarrassed with the comments

Rok: anything? anything at all?

Mac: 20 serebians
Rok: Anyone gonig hire dont blame you if you dont sold to that gentalment there.

Mac: well hello? you speak serebian?
Ty: Buy friend, him now.
Mac: Not well but fine 50 serebans!
Rok: sold.

N.M: so wait a second mac?
O.m: Yea mac have a problem?
N.M: People say Mac is more of a meniece then a hero?
O.M: Well you will hvae to deside for yourself, and the story dont lie.

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eh, spelling. good story though ^^
i look forward to its continuation :3

Spoiler:

I hope I come xD

YA KINGDRA WOO

Dont spame my story >.> and thnx espeon (mostly everyone will be in the story unless i dont like you then your not >.<)


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N.M: Oh he welcome back!
O.M: Thanx had dinner it was good.
N.M: Cool, so can you tell me some more of the History!
O.M: Where were we? Are we at the Part where Chrono rescuse the Damzel in destress by defeating the dragon of Moonko?
N.M: No Ty and Ash just got bought by Mac? yea thats right.
O.M: Oh ok, so......

After Mac had bought his to new slaves, Ty and Ash, Mac brought them back to his house.

Variant: Mac is that you?
Mac: Yea
Variant: Where did you go? I was worried.
Mac: The gods of Serebii sent me on a mission to rescuse to boys.
Variant: Really? like the Gods sent you to get 5 new maids that we dont need?
Mac: So you understand!
Variant: No.
Mac: So anyways meat, erm whats your names again?
Ty: Ty
Ash: Ash.
Mac: Ty and Ash
Variant: Right, well if there going to stay they might as well make themselves useful, can you to go to the market and get some food, here you go, heres the list and some money.
Ash: Sure.
Mac: You think they should go by them selves?
Ty: I think it would be fine sir!
Mac: Well i trust you to retourn!
Variant: Maple will be here any minute so let them go, you go wash Mac, you smell like a swamp squirtle!

So Ash and Ty made there was towards the markett.

Ash: They seem nice, and they trust use! and thats good.
Ty: Which ways the gate? do you know?
Ash: We cant leave!
Ty: Watch me!
Ash: Ty look if you try and leave they may come looking for use, and if they find use they will send us to death. or worse they may not trust use anymore, we might as well try and earn our freedom!
Ty: Ash look, Mac is simple, it was easy to get out of there, now let us go, I was a smooth talker, hehe.
Ash: Lead the way, then.
Ty: finally your not living by rules, i wanna get back home now and you can come with me.
Ash: Wasn't your home destroyed?
Ty: Oh yea i forgot
???: HEY YOU!!!!!!
Ty: hmm?
Ash: What now?
???: Hello!?
Ty: Iam confused
Ash: Me to?
???: dont be!!
Ty: Who are you?
???: Me well iam nothing but Mercury, leader of the restiance against king Serebii!
Ty: Well good luck with that.
Mercury: What?
Ash: Well we will be going now, hope you win!
Mercury: Wait, dont you wanna join!
Ty: Not really, i have my own mission to do right now.
Mercury: Would you like some help?
Ash: Erm not right now, I think we just need to get out of here first.
Mercury: Well you cant just walk out!
Ash: See!
Ty: Means nothing.
Mercury: But i know secreat tunnels that lead to outside the city. But keep that quiet, only the resistance know about it.
Ty: Whose in the "resistance"?
Mercury: This girl.
Ash: Ahh
Mercury: WELL LETS GET OUT OF HERE THOUGHT UNDERGROUND TUNNELS!!!!!!HAHA
Ash: So much for being quiet.
Ty: It seems to me Mercury is not all there.

So mercury lead the way to a house, they went inside and there was nothing in there.

Ty: Great tunnel, well thanks for you help.
Mercury: Are you that stupid, I would give away the tunnels, i hid them.
Ash: Great,
Mercury: here.

Mercury removes the floor boards in the ground and reveals a hole.

Mercury: Well have fun and enjoy the trip

Mercury pushed Ash and Ty down the hole, and they start sliding left and right for a while, untill. they get thrown out of the exit.

Ash: WHOOO THAT WAS GREAT lets do it again!
Ty: Well looks like were outside
Ash: So what exactly are we trying to do? Exactly?
Ty: I dont know, i just go with the flow!
Ash: You cant do that! you gotta have a plan!
Ty: Fine we walk this way, there plan sorted.
Ash: But you dont know where your going!
Ty: Who cares? as long as were not slaves lets find somewhere we can stay, then we can think of what we wanna do!

So Ty and Ash walk for what seems like ages, they walked throught the woods, got attack by big spiders, Ty killed a bear and made clothes for Ash and him. Ash was amazed its been a while since hes been out of the City of Pooka and has lost some of his abbilties. After a few days of constant walking and sleeping, they start to get hungry,

Ty: Look there! looks like a town!
Ash: lets go!

So Ty and Ash run down the hill and get to the town, people stare at them in amazment, wounder where these boys came from.

Ty: Ash what do we do?
Ash: What do you mean, what do we do?
Ty: It was your idea to come to the town, now everyone is stareing at us!
???: Is Everything all right?
Villager: Well these boys just appeared out of no where.
???: Well what are we doing, standing here, show them some Raymania hospitality.
Ty: Raymania?
???: CHRONO?
Chrono: Yes chris?
Chris: Get them some food and water, and take them to your house, I be right there!
Chrono: Sure. Come on!!!!

So Chrono took them to his house and gave them some food and water, Ty and Ash kept eating and drinking, and asking for more.

Chrono: Slow down or you will hurt your stomach!
Ty: Much much munch this is good.
Ash: Thank you.
Chrono: So what are you doing here?
Ty: We escaped from Pooka.
Chrono: Ahh Pooka.
Ash: Its Chrono right?
Chrono: Yea.
Ash: Well iam Ash and this is Ty.
Chrono: Cool. Well you guys look tired, i will telll chris to hold it off while you guys get some rest, I dont this it would be good, to question you right now,
Ash: Thank you.

N.M: Wow Chrono seems nice!
O.M: Yea ad becomes a good friend to them.
N.M: So what is Ty's objective?
O.M: You will just have to keep lissinging,
N.M: Aww i wish i could just hear the good stuff!
o.M: soon we will get to the good stuff with Chrono who hands down is my favorite character in Shaychu History.
N.M: really, i thought Ty would be?
O.M: Ty is already a hero, but really without Chrono, shaychu would have fallen.
N.M: Get out!
O.M: No serious, shaychu was about to be destroyed but Chrono saved it.
N.M: So what happend to Ash and Ty, whhere are they now?
O,M: That would give away the story i gotta go bye.
N.M: Bye

Nice story.
Except Chrono sounds extremely mary suish.
AND WORK ON YOUR DARN SPELLING >.<

mary ish?

a mary sue like character lol
a character that's like good at everything.
I'm not saying that you're making chrono a mary sue (or gary stu or whatever it is), but the fact that you kinda make him sound amazing makes it slightly mary suish.

'mary-sue' is explained in the role play guide and you are warned to avoid making characters like her.

Spoiler:

i also agree on the spelling, it needs a little work
the story itself is good though ^^ keep it up

DarkHeart wrote:yeee good goign. its interesting.. >:] where do the bad guys come in? Like the REAL BAD guys XD oh yea and WHO IS O.M and N.M? im so confused about that XD (if its importand you dont have to answert it)

O.M. - Old Member
N.M. - New Member

O.M: Welcome back N.M
N.M: Thnx, wubu2
O.M: oh doing this and that, the usual.
N.M: Ok, sounds cool, btw what happend after Ty and Ash went into chrono's house?
O.M: Well.........


Chrono had sent away Chris and the leader of Raymania away from his house saying Ty and Ash needed rest, which they did. Then the next morning the people of Raymainia gathard around Chrono's house awaiting to see what Chris and the leader and the 2 elders would do with the passing boys.

The leader: so you say you were in serebii?
Ash: Yes.
Chris: Then why are you in our village?
Ty: Why is it such a big deal?
Elder 1: It is because a great darkness is approching the world, it will try to take over the world and destroy it.
Chris: Shhh ixion thats an old tale.
Ixion: But it will come true, only a chosen few, may be able to defeat such a great and powerful darkness and free the land and make a home for safety. But the kingdoms wont do what the teachings have tought us and this darkness will come for vengence, and we will be the ones to suffer.
Ty: Then someone must do something? Right
Chrono: there is nothing we can do, the kingdoms wont even lissen to us let alone look at us.
Ty: Than maybe your aproching them wrong!
Leader: Your saying that what we have done was wrong?
Ash: Ty calm down.
Ty: No you were just doing it wrong.
Elder 2: I say let them go, they must be harmless anyways. If you two want to go find away to prevent the darkness from killing us all then go a head i say.
Leader: You sure?
Elder 2: But do any of you know how to fight?
Ty: Fight?
Elder 2: You know sword and spear killing rawr, that sort of thing?
Chrono: its easy.
Ash: Do we need to fight?
Ixion: In hope of defeating the darkness, unless you want to set it down for a nice cup of tea, maybe that was the problem 200 years ago when our elders fought the beast, and gave us the teachings to prevent it from returning.
Ash: But you sure it is coming back?
Chrono: Its in the starts, the way the animals have changed there nature, the world is changing, and its signs of the darkness returning,
Ty: Then i must go, we must do something ash.


Ty runs out of the house, followed quickly by Ash.

Crowd: Oh my ,
Can they do this?

They ran past the crowd into the woods not knowing where there fates may take them, not knowing what there destiny holds.

After a while of walking.....

voice: HEY WAIT FOR ME!!!!!!!
Ty: hmmm you said something?
Ash: No but it sounded like it came from over there.
Chrono: Meh finally caught up to you. (breathing heavily)
Ty: Chrono, is it? what are you doing here?
Chrono: Yes my name is chrono, and iam here to help you (calming down).
Ash: Help us?
Chrono: You dont know how to fight, So you need someone to protect you, hehe.
Ash: We will do fine without you.
Chrono: Oh come on i ran for ages trying to catch up to you guys.
Ty: I say he can come, we could use your help.
Chrono: Cool me and my blade (pulls our a sword like Sir Auron from FFX) are here to help. By the way here are presents from the village.

Chrono, bulls our a sword from somewhere and a spear, the spear was given to Ty, and the sword was given to Ash.

Chrono: Use it well, now ON WORD TO.....where are we going?
Ty: i dunno.
Ash:Me either, just fallowing the road.
Chrono: HAHAHA so be it , ON WORD.


O.M: well tahts all i have time for gotta go you think about what just happend i will bbl.
N.M: Bye then.
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thats awesome who else will be in it............

O.M: Hey how are you?
N.M: I am ok slightly tired.
O.M: Thats a shame.
N.M: Why?
O.M: I was going to tell you more of the story.
N.M: I still want to here it, please tell me!
O.M: Ok..........................

So while Ty, Ash and Chrono were traviling, in the palace of Grooma (the country this is set in), Something evil was going on, something very bad.

King David: General Darkheart where are you?
Darkheart: Here m'lord.
King David: Good, i need to have my nap for the party tonight, please dont let anyone desterb me or there will be trouble.
Deakheart: Yes sir.

King David goes into a room and slames the door.

Darkheart: Goooooood, you heard him iam in charge while the king gets some sleep.....Hmmm what to do. hu?
Zak: KING, KING QUICKLY KING!!!!
Darkheart: Shooooosh the king is asleep and iam in charge!
Zak: Oh no i need to speek to the king now!
Darkheart: Why?
Zak: The kingdoms have gone out of control and are killing everything in sight!
Darkheart: Dont worry the king doesn't need to know.
Zak: But he must do something about the kingdoms!
Darkheart: Between you and me, the king doesn't know that he lost all of his power, he still thinks he owns the land.
Zak: But, But why?
Darkheart: Because i wanna be King, i mean Queen. Zak now your either with me or against me?
Zak: I gess iam with you, i think you would be a better King, shooot i mean Queen.
Darkheart: My ponit exactly, no affence to David he's good person but i would rather let the country destroy it self i pick up the pieces nd boom iam King i mean Queen.
Zak: Brilliant you will be Queen in know time.
DarkHeart: I know.
Zak: How did this war even began?
Darkheart: I started it, hahaha it was easy,
Zak: You did! how?
Darkheart: Well...

Mean while back to our heros

Ash: YAWN
Ty: Whats up Ash?
Ash: We have no plans, and i sware were going around and around in circles.
Chrono: All part of the advanture isnt it?
Ty: Hmmm yea i see what ash means i sware we have been here before.
Ash: Ok stop, we need a plan.
Chrono: A plan for what tho? we cant have a plan for no goals.
Ash: Fine what about if we try and end the chaos.
Ty: But what could we do?
Chrono: We could go see the king, at his palace.
Ty and Ash: King?
Chrono: Oh i forgot you guys were from tribes in the middle of nowhere. Well the King is the person who controlls Grooma, which is the country we are living in, get it?
Ty: Kinda. hmm could he help us with our mission then?
Ash: Yea could he?
Chrono: Its worth a shot...

chrono wrote:O.M: Oh yea everyone wanted a piece of the chrono, and i think some others got a few action aswell

lmao

am i Ty? xD

this story is inaccurate but its good.

lol am i the bad guy?